Local Teen, Works Over Load
Purpose: To stress the point of taking to much on in life, when at this point the teen needs to step back and focus on work.
Dena Norton suffers from an acute case of work over load. Her systems seem to be shutting down when all the work that has been put off catersup with her. At this point all she can seem to do is just duck her head and keep working on the most impotent assiments.
"She has always done fine in school, so when she said she was taking more shifts I didn't event think that it would effect her school work like this" says Lauren Norton mother of Dena. As to watch this teen run around like a chicken with her head cut off. Its plain to see she is a simple "procrastinator" says local physiologist Lisa Lovegood.
" Its plain to see if Dena just put the time in she wouldn't be so cought up in trying to get everything done. And I don't blame working to much on her failures, just she has to plan her time and learn how to say no to a shift when she can" says Lovegood.
The work load seems to be getting a lot heaver day by day but the fact is as Dena puts of this work her grades and social life will suffer for her to catch back up with the rest of the class.
There are a lot of spelling and puctuation errors, making it a little difficult to read. I find it helps to read over and double check to find mistakes. It's a good start though. I agree with your topic, a friend of mine has the same problem with her workplace, trying to balance her school work as well. Maybe you could expand on it a bit more.
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